Decidedly Deeks Mini Fan Fic by Phillydi

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Welcome again to Decidedly Deeks!  This week we feature a mini fanfic by Phillydi written exclusive for DD.  We also started a new section where we will present a fan video or fanfic featuring Marty Deeks that we think you should check out (see below).

For now….sit back and enjoy….

Sweet Soul Violins

By Phillydi

“Anyone seen Deeks?”  Kensi called out as she entered the bullpen.

“Nope,” Callen looked up from his desk.

“Probably went surfing,” Sam grunted.

“I’ll kill him!” Kensi said in aggravation.  It had been a long day and Kensi wanted to finish her paperwork and go home.  The problem was Deeks was supposed to be working on the report with her and it was due on Hetty’s desk tomorrow.

“Check the boathouse,” Nell called out as she walked by. “He asked me for the new pass code before he left thirty minutes ago.”

“He better be working on that report, or he is one dead cop,” Kensi steamed and went in search of her wayward partner.

As she entered the boathouse, Kensi heard the strains of a soulful violin coming from inside.   Deeks must have NPR* on again, she thought.  Kensi took two more steps inside and was instead stunned to see him standing next to the center table with his foot propped up on one the chairs.  Deeks’ eyes were closed in deep concentration while the sweetest music came wafting out from the violin he was holding.

Kensi placed her hand over her heart as it raced faster in response to the music.  The veins in his hands stood out from exertion, which only added to the beauty of his playing as his fingers floated rapidly over the fret board.  She took one more step and the floor beneath her foot creaked loudly, disrupting Deek’s performance.  His eyes flew open when he realized someone else was standing in the room.

“You really can play the violin!” Kensi swooned. “That was beautiful, Deeks.”  She stepped in closer to look at the sheet music spread out over the table.

Sonata for Solo Violin, No 1 in G Minor by Johann Sebastian Bach

“I’m impressed,” she shook her head in disbelief. “I thought this was another one of your exaggerations. I’m sorry, I didn’t believe you.”

“There must be something wrong with my hearing, because I could have sworn Kensi Blye just said she was sorry?” Deeks smirked as he held his hand up to his ear.

“Ok, I deserved that,” Kensi said remorsefully.  “But what are you doing here?”

“I can’t practice at home, and I needed a quiet space to rehearse because if you must know…” Deeks stopped and looked down in embarrassment. “I wanted to serenade you after dinner one night as a surprise.”

Kensi opened her mouth in amazement.  “That is the most romantic thing I’ve ever heard,” she blushed. “I don’t know what to say.”

Kensi was speechless and desperately wished she could disappear behind one of the posts.

“I’m…going to go…now,” she stammered, stumbling backwards out of the room and tripping over the threshold as she left. She had totally forgotten about the report.

Deeks chuckled to himself, amazed at how Kensi had become totally undone by his little surprise.

An image suddenly popped up again on the flat screen against the far wall.

“No time to dillydally, Mr. Deeks,” Hetty scolded.  “We have a lot of work to do on this piece if you want to continue to impress Ms. Blye.  You were a bit flat in the third measure of the first movement. Let’s take it from the top, shall we?”

“Yes ma’am!” Deeks said as his bow touched the strings and the sweet music of Bach filled the air once more.

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(Disclaimer: All these characters are owned by CBS and created by Shane Brennan and company. I’m just borrowing them for a little bit of fun.)

*National Public Radio

Next week we are going to explore Deeks’ music background written exclusive for DD by @ghartler.  

We invite everyone to submit your own mini fanfic of 500 words or less to Decided Deeks for publication.  If you are a seasoned fanfic writer, write for fun, or would like to try writing a Deeks-centric story for the first time, we would love to feature your creation.  If you have ever wanted to finish a special scene, or explore an area of Deeks life that was mentioned in the show, these one-shot fics should be no more than 500 words and complete when submitted.   Please send your mini fanfic to:  diane@ncislamagazine.com

Decidedly Deeks Feature

FanFic and Video of the Week

Solus

by Sweet Lu

http://www.fanfiction.net/s/7798925/1/Solus

This was the first story I read from this talented writer and fell in love with her portrayal of Deeks right away.  It’s hard to read just one of her fanfics, I promise you will go back for more. 

 

56 Reasons to Ship Deeks & Kensi

by ibroketheinternetxo

This video is so artfully done, and I enjoyed the way the scenes are cut and the music plays sweetly in the background.  Whether you are a shipper or not, this features the best of Deeks and Kensi on screen.

 

If you have any recommendations for a fanfic or video about Deeks that you would like to see featured on Decidedly Deeks, please submit them to diane@ncislamagazine.com.

5 thoughts on “Decidedly Deeks Mini Fan Fic by Phillydi

  1. Gayle

    Diane:
    Wonderful job on the fan fic! I somehow didn’t see the ending bit with Hetty coming (that sneaky little ninja)!
    Gayle

  2. Sweet Lu

    Stunned that Deeks can master Bach. I sure couldn’t. But the frosting on the cake was Hetty critiquing him via the video screen. Easy to picture and to believe that Hetty has a good ear for music and would give Deeks a place to practice. Nice that Kensi didn’t denigrate him, but was mesmerized by what she heard. There’s more to the boy than she can ever imagine.

  3. Maris

    Un momento delicioso ,especial muy bien escrito !tan bien que pude visualizar todo ,me encanto!!!quiero mas!!!

  4. Kriss

    Hermoso cuento ,bello ,dulce amo a Deeks pude imaginarlo tocando el violin!te felicito Phillydi desde argentina un gran beso para todos!!!

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